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everwatcher
post Nov 16 2006, 01:56 AM
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Hi all, from this point on we'll be changing how Wannabe Rumble runs.

Basically, it'll be the Wannabe Rumble!: the COMMUNITY multi-SI Fan Fiction Project.

Meaning everyone can now post their own fan fictions. A copy of the works posted here will also be available at the WR temporary site. (www.tabulas.com/~mkkpn)

However, I do strongly suggest the following guidelines so as to keep the fun intact:

1) If possible, include the other original WR characters in your story, and don't forget their profiles. I think everyone appreciates it when the character they posted appears in a story. There's also a certain happiness found in putting other original characters along with your own. happy.gif I'll be copying all of the profiles to the temporary site and provide links later. smile.gif

2) Make it a "slice-of-life" story if possible. Simple scenario, open ended; make us witnesses to the events as they happen. Just be careful when interlapping it with a canon SR episode/scenario. smile.gif
Why a slice of life story?
- no complex plot. so no need to think of grand storylines beforehand.
- leisure of writing. it's something you can write during your free time, or even at the moment where inspiration strikes you.
- less chance of conflict/contradiction between stories or with the SR anime/manga.
- ease of reading for everyone.
- easier construction/flow of ideas.
- fun to do.

3) No FINAL pairings. Some implied romance here and there would be a nice touch. But please don't make a sweeping statement of you and an SR character ending up together happily ever after, the end. I know it's your story but it takes the fun out of the whole activity.

Example 1: Mik and Youko met again by accident during the summer, in which they ended up touring around Yagami, looking for stuff that Youko needs for her art exhibit. During that time, they discovered that they share some things in common, particularly in their life's philosophies. After they parted as the night sets in, Mik wonders about how the future might play out because of that encounter. He shakes that thought away due to the possibilities and complexities. What's important is that he moved a step. Meanwhile, a small smile carved up in Youko's face as she drives back to her home.

Example 2: Me and eri go "su-ki" at each other and became bf and gf. the end. GG.

Let's try to avoid example no.2 ok? smile.gif

4) Finally, let's set a theme for our works, depending on the time of the year.
The current Summer Arc will be changed to:
The Christmas and New Year Arc! (starting from November 25,2006 until January 5,2007)
- X-mas/new year themed stories (i.e. I was thinking of an Xmas play led by Wzy, with the other roles being played by the teachers, and some students)
- Might overlap with canon SR anime events (i.e. your character is also around during the lion dance)
- Might also be stand-alone events
- Present your local celebrations! Let's enjoy the cultural variety!
- the Theme is optional. You may post a story that isn't related to the theme. A theme is placed as both a fun factor and a writing challenge for everyone.

Reasons for this sudden change:
1) The sheer writing talent in everyone.
Really. happy.gif The character profiles are very creative, and each original character has certain traits/qualities that sets him/her apart from the others. Then there are the nice background stories to further add depth to the character and give everyone a peek into his/her lifestyle. I think everyone deserves to create and post his/her story.

2) Benefits of working as a group
We can help improve each other's ability by providing constructive criticisms, opinions and feedback to submitted works. Story ideas and different writing styles can also be shared around.

3) Long-term stability

4) Personal Issues
The recent events in my life will severely limit my writing time. (I'm transferring to a more "pocket-friendly" university. lol , and have a lot of catching up to do >.<)

A simple vision:
A collection of short "slice of life" works from the writing talents of the WR community.

A very warm thank you to everyone who participated and supported this thread. We're looking forward to your works. happy.gif I'll continue posting/writing as well.

Compliments to Myah for his post, which helped me decide to take this action and open WR! writing for everyone. smile.gif

Very special thanks to danchou! Who personally offered to write. (he made Chapter 3 and Chapter 6 a.k.a. GTT) Sorry for the short notice of the change. I hope you can still continue writing! biggrin.gif Now we won't be troubled about who will write about who. haha.

So that's about it. Goodluck to all of us. laugh.gif


hi. I guess this is one of those times that a person is struck with the motivation of writing a fan fiction of the series that he/she loves. After reading jbile's, takano's, and other excellent works, I wanted to try out writing about school rumble...but with a different approach.

SI (self-insertion) in fanfiction lingo refers to the immersion of a writer to the world that he/she is writing about through the means of creating a literary avatar/ representation of him or herself (mostly with some details added in order to "blend in" with the world he/she is writing about).
Basically, he/she writes the story with him/herself as a participant in the events that happen.

I haven't tried this style before, and even hated it at some point due to reading some SI fanfics wherein the authors portray themselves as powerful, omnipotent beings (i.e. in shounen anime fan fiction). But since the world this fan fiction will be based upon is School Rumble, I think that this threat will be non-existent.

Anyway, enough of my senseless rambling.

Since we have an active community here, I thought of making a multi-SI story, where people here can take part in it as other characters in the world of SR.

I humbly ask for the participation of anyone interested in my idea. Opinions, ideas, and constructive criticisms regarding the idea itself will be most appreciated. Just keep the flaming to wittily low levels. lol

So for a start, anyone interested in participating can write about the profile of their character. I'll start with myself.

Forum name: everwatcher
Story name:Mik (my nickname in real life)
Profession: World Literature teacher in Yagami High
Physical Description:
-tall
-wears glasses due to astigmatism
-serious looking (but not serious)
-age is around the early 20's
Specific Details:
-once hoped to be a manga artist
-lazy
-loves anime and manga
-not good with women, lol.
-usually hangs around with the boys of 2c during breaktime/after school, where they teach him how to approach girls.
-attacted to Sasakura-sensei..okay that's an understatement

The rumbling begins when we have enough characters .

Current Cast of Characters
Story Status
Current Theme: WR! In Chirstmas and New Year!
Current Chapters: 7
Chapter 1 - Summer is in the air, but that doesn't seem to be the case for the two figures in Yagami High.
Chapter 2 - A small welcoming party for two new teachers. Watch Tani-sensei make an accurately frightening guess.
Chapter 3 - written by danchou - Ishikawa's school life...in the middle of summer? And he's going to be retained? Noooo!
Chapter 4 - Five unlikely people meet at a newly opened arcade. How will this fated encounter play out? Part 1
Chapter 5 - Challenges were issued! Player vs Player! And what the...Asou received 5 tokens for free? Part 2
Chapter 6 - written by danchou - A look into the (currently) poor lifestyle of the computer expert Terru. Wait...he's applying as a music teacher?
Chapter 7 - A brief look at Ace's life, and the role that Sagano Megumi plays in it...my personal favorite so far.




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post Nov 16 2006, 02:26 AM
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I'll be gone for a few weeks and i'd HATE to miss out on another "event" in WF forums...So,yeah,can i participate?

Forum name: puppeteer
Story name: (can i use puppeteer?If i can't,kindly inform me and i'll edit it)
Profession: Akira's apprentice in espionage(which makes me a transfer student in 2-c)
Physical Description:
-tall
-no-specs
-quite a poker-face
-blonde hair!!!! biggrin.gif
-male(aren't we all?) mellow.gif
-age=16/17
Specific Details:
-i STILL hopes to be a manga artist... tongue.gif
-lazy
-loves Harima Hario's manga
-sarcastic,in a happy way... dry.gif

Is this acceptable? unsure.gif




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post Nov 16 2006, 04:03 AM
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Forum name: homeless_homo

Story name: homo

Profession: homo student of yagami high

Physical Description:
-extremely sexy.
-male

Specific Details:
-wants Nagayama even though I'm a homo.
-friends with harry mckenzie and togou.

Image of me:

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post Nov 16 2006, 04:32 AM
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ok, I'm in too

Forum Name: wzyote05

story name: hmm...let's go with Wzy since i'm lazy

profession: stage manager for the drama department; also the new music teacher

Physical description
- average (179cm)
- glasses (always wearing Sun-glasses outdoors, normal indoors)
- age early 20's
- Attire: Black muscle-T under a white Button-up, Black Jeans, long length black Jacket

Specifics
- not particularly talkative, but a nice guy
- serious when things need to be done, but a fun guy at other times
- is a bit paranoid
- is sort of friends with everyone, but is close friends with no one (adding a sense of mystery??)
- helped supply some of the items for Akira's Battle of Yagami High (such as the "exploding" cans Hanai shot)

for those of you who are curious, this is heavily based on my own HS experience. I was the stage manager of the drama dept (hell, i got paid), i taught underclassmen music (although they were already good and all i taught were group dynamics), and the specifics are somewhat close (definitely the paranoid part)

'Edit' - i've added attire for kicks (it's basically what I wear now)




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post Nov 16 2006, 10:06 AM
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Forum name: diapason_89

Story name: Tsukamoto Shinji

Profession: A student but actually part of the JSDF (Japanese Special Defense Forces) 149th Tactical Espionage Battalion

Physical description:
- 164 centimeters in height, 54 kilograms in weight
- has a metal arm because of amputated left arm infected with polio (like Full Metal Alchemist's Edward)
- like a normal 17-year old boy

Specifics:
- Tenma and Yakumo's long lost brother after the shipwreck of November 16, 2004.
- got right arm amputated because of polio since birth
- second year high school student
- protects the weak, but has this hate for Harima.
- hides feeling for Sagano Megumi.
- on a mission to guard Sawachika Eri from a dangerous mafia group.
- Hanai's sparring partner (fights him with right arm only)
- Akira's secretive partner in crime

Tell me if it sucks big time with a big text. biggrin.gif




D-Day 4 is Sarah Adiemus's Birthday!

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D-Day 3 is Tsukamoto Yakumo's Birthday!

33

D-Day 2 is Sawachika Eri's Birthday!

10

Condition Yellow issued!

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In need of the following resources: 20-25 screenshots or pictures of Eri-sama. Please deposit them to the Philippine Faction Headquarters to start Operation: Golden Banquet. Dimensions must be ranging from 426x320 to 640x480.
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post Nov 16 2006, 12:37 PM
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hi i'm interested with your idea can i join in? i'm still newbie but i think this will be fun happy.gif .
here i goes:
Forum Name: Chain_Impact

Story Name: Ace (my nickname)

Profession: A student and a part of deliquent student in yagami high school

Physical description:
-Male
-height: 182 cm
-18 year old
-Weight: 70 kilograms
-Right arm is more strong than left arm
-Have sunglasses but i seldom use it
-Sometimes i wear cap
-Have some muscles but not so big

Specifics:
-Always bring DS and PSP to school and play one of them when have a free time
-Exist in 2-c sitting behind Harima
-Has crush with Akira and Saeko (I have to choose one of them wub.gif )
-Good with BB gun and also the collector of BB gun (Actually i also good with real gun)
-Doesn't like to fight someone even myself a deliquent student
-Become deliquent student when someone try to fight with me
-Megumi Sagano best freind
-Always say some sarcastic words but in joke situation
-Always wear baggy pants and shirt uniform
-Like to hearing music with headset
-Like to smoke with cigar
-Has own motorcycle and car
-Live alone in apartment (same as harima's apartment)
-Has part time job in console and PC game shop
-Working hard in his part time job to gain much money to buy a new sport car
-Sometimes (Rarely) i get work from the man and i get a big salary i don't know if(my life at stakes too happy.gif ) that's why i good with real gun
-Maniac with many games such as: FPS, RTS, Strategy, etc and not to forget A good Dota player. but sucks at Rhyme games and puzzle
-Good with c0mputer
-In fighting Ace have a permanent ability it is called "Overdrive Adrenaline" which make him Stronger to beat his opponent
-Good in some sport especially: Football, Basketball, and Baseball


P.S: Specific can be change depends on myself i'll make it real as i am. The changes will be mark with red color. (I remove specifics such as: i provide akira and freind with bb gun in battle of yagami high cuz the story take far from battle of yagami high)




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post Nov 16 2006, 01:20 PM
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COOL! Can I join?


Forum name: kenjiharima

Story name: The Brawler

Profession: One of Harima's Old Rival

Physical description:
-stands 5'10", weighs 240lbs has a semi fat bulk yet a muscular built
-wears a cap ALWAYS
-he has long baggy school pants
-has partial facial hair, beard

Specifics:
-he wants nothing but a good fight win or lose
-always at arcades playing
-trains at home with his punching bag
-always sleeps at classes
-did not participated in the Sukuran Feastival
-2-D's lone wolf
-has strong fast striking fists when fighting
-lives with his girlfriend


hope this is ok...





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post Nov 16 2006, 02:58 PM
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My Yagami Idol(s): Eri



Forum name: Hayashi Aska

Story name: Kobayashi Chieko (Child Forest - Wise Child) *female*

Profession:
Programmer... Gamer...

Physical:
Cat Eyes...
Megane...
Tsundere...
Slim... <--- of course, since its anime...
Single ponytail... Slightly below shoulder length hair... Has long side bangs... Black Hair...
<Added>
160 cms
43 kgs *I donno bout female weights, so I based them from my female cousins*
But in anime, females don't tell their weight... So, it's supposed to be secret...
B Cup laugh.gif
Birthday: 20 March *My Birthday*
Horoscope: Pisces
Blood type: AB *Mine too*

Specifics:
A little anti-social...
Bad in history class...
Medium in sports...
The rest are good...
Maths number 1...
Easily embarassed but wouldn't fight back... Prefers to avoid those jerks...
MMORPG player...
She's very dull fashioned...
Currently inlove with an MMO guy... <--- Hope no one take the role of this guy...
<Since terru mentioned he is a Comp Science teacher...>
Favourite teacher: Terru



*LOL! She's gonna be cute! Try to hit on me! Ah Nvm...* wink.gif "Chu~!"


*I prefer to be a white cat and date with Iori the whole way*
"Nyaa?"
"NYAA~!"
"Nyyaaa..."
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post Nov 16 2006, 03:05 PM
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Mizore Shirayuki ~~~bouncy
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Btw can we add pics? So we can have a real feel to our characters and see how they look and blend in the sukuran world.





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post Nov 16 2006, 10:17 PM
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First Class White Fang Berserker Swordmaster of the Gilded Army
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My Yagami Idol(s): Sawachika Eri



Can't believe I almost missed out on this one... Okay, here goes...

Forum name: Hitotsu

Story name: let's stick with Hitotsu

Profession: student with a part-time job in a restaurant, partially deliquent

Physical Description:
-177cm tall
-muscular body structure (due to workouts)
-dark hair
-age of 17, but looks older (due to hige happy.gif )
-light blue eyes
-rather pale than tanned

Specific Details:
-practices martial arts, switching between tai-jutsu and aikido
-has a secret crush on Eri-sama
-likes Harima's style, though Harima doesn't really like him (isn't aware who Harima is in love with)
-really dislikes people who talk a lot of nonsense and can't be serious when needed
-is rather intelligent, but due to that lazy. Though into informatics and occasionally some games
-respects intelligent people and tries to protect them from bullies
-never looks for trouble without a reason, but is quasi unbeatable in close combat
-goes berserker in a swordfight and kills the enemy even after receiving severe wounds

EDIT: Exchange student from Russia, not really asocial but doesn't spontaniously search for friends. Is planning to stay in Japan. Lives alone.
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post Nov 17 2006, 01:38 AM
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Forum name: Danchou
Story name: Ishikawa Aname
-石川天音
Profession: Normal Student

Physical Description:
-178CM
-Wears non-prescription glasses for fun
-somewhat baby-face
-age is 17
-hazel eyes
-brown/black hair (due to dying)
-shirt is always half tucked out
-tanned due to sports


Specific Details:

-basketball team vice-captain (plays center)
-happy-go-lucky
-loves sleeping
-doesn't like fighting but is really good at it
-serious in basketball, and really good at it
-tries to act punkish but always gets soft hearted in the end
-loves fluffy things, especially soft-toys
-mix well with the girls (only cause they treat me like their sister)
-spends the whole day in class either sleeping or smsing girls
-too shy to ask a girl out on a date (usually go with 2 or more together)
-very hardworking in studying when at home, but results always seem to suck
-loves competition
-has a habit of blurting out super random stuff and random times
*most impt
-has a crush on eri-chan


haha, this is somewhat true in real life... :x
and ichijo looks almost like a splitting image of my girlfriend, except of the green hair. o.o
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post Nov 17 2006, 01:46 AM
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Guys, thank you very much participating, and making very detailed profiles of your characters. happy.gif It will be very challenging, but very fun as well, to put them all together along with the characters of the SR universe.

As an introduction/background, our story starts during the summer vacation before the second term. The starting chapters are more inclined to introducing our characters through short scenarios scattered throughout the course of the summer. No grand plot, no huge misunderstandings, and no action yet, but merely slices of life as they happen. lol laugh.gif

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Chapter 1 – [Figure 1 and Figure 2] Someday!
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The sun rises from the eastern horizon, peeling off the shadows left by the night from the walls of Yagami High School. The school ground is devoid of life, and everything seem to be in a standstill. The only signs of movement are from the slight rustling of fallen leaves, dust, and other little things careless enough to be blown away softly by the wind.

Vacation has embraced the world again.

"BUZZT!!!"

A loud buzzer broke the serene atmosphere, and echoed throughout the empty halls. From the source of the sound, two figures can be seen standing within the remaining shadows of the topmost floor in one of the buildings.

"You're caught. That's it for today." said the one of the figures. The voice was serious, calm, and feminine.

"But isn't that a bit unfair? You said that there were 64 cameras." reasoned the other in an annoyed, but respectful masculine tone.

"65. Our profession expects the unexpected and adjusts accordingly to the given scenario." replied the female figure.

"And their buzzers are too sensitive. I merely took a peek before going in and it went off." complained the male figure.

"It's as good as being seen." answered the female as she took off a small camera from one of the small corners. "Infrared is infrared."

"Sure, sure. If you say so." said the male figure as he shook his head and walked closer to the other person. "But I still don't get it. I was told that we have the same specialty, that's why I was assigned by the organization as your apprentice. Then here you are, making me go through all these sneaking and infiltration exercises. Shouldn't you be teaching me how to ma-"

"BUZZT!" rang the buzzer loudly as he took a step closer.

"Oops, 66. Now is not the time to teach you that. It's summer after all." replied the female, in a somewhat amused tone as she took off the camera that buzzed the moment before. "What's more important is that we do something about your name."

"Huh?"

"You don't expect our classmates to call you 'puppeteer' when the term starts, right?"

"Oh...right."

"Peter."

"Who?"

"P-e-t-e-r. I just took off the excess letters from your codename." explained the female as she zipped her backpack full of micro cameras, and slugged it at her back.

"Wow, that name sounds so cool.” replied the male figure dryly, but the other person had already started making her way down the stairs.

Puppeteer (or Peter) just stood on the spot and sighed as he heard the footsteps below fading away. After a few moments, he turned his eyes towards the window and to the ground below, where he saw the female figure currently leaving the building and making her way towards the gate. A slight grin curled in his lip as he opened one of the windows and pointed his finger at the walking figure as if it were a gun.

"Takano-san, someday...someday..." he whispered to himself as he pretended to fire off a shot, his arm flung upwards due to the imaginary recoil.

"BUZZZZZZZZTTTT!!!"


"What the..?" Peter exclaimed as he noticed a small camera glued to the outside wall, placed high enough to exactly catch his arm in its infrared sensors when it "recoiled" upwards. His cellular phone started to vibrate - he just received a text message:

"67. My mistake." was all it said. Peter frowned slightly as he placed his cellphone back in his pocket and started to make his way down the stairs.


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Chapter 2 – [Yagami High Teachers, Wzy, and Mik] One Fine{?} Evening
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Evening, in a fine cafe somewhere in Yagami.

"And so we welcome the new faculty of Yagami High." spoke Katou Kyouji in his usual dry, monotonous tone. "(Although there are only two of you, and you're sort of emergency replacements) Welcome and cheers."

"Cheers!” came the collective reply of the other teachers that gathered around the round table. They are actually only a small group, composed of Sasakura Youko - the art teacher, Osakabe Itoko - who teaches science and physics, Tani Hayato - class 2c's homeroom teacher; he teaches english as well, Katou Kyouji - class 2D's homeroom teacher and history teacher, Mr. Kouriyama - who teaches physical education, and two new teachers: Wzy - who teaches music, and Mik - who teaches World Literature.

"Thank you." said Wzy, who lifted his glass and joined with the others.

"We look forward on working with you." added Mik, as he raised his own glass.

"Haha, that's a good start!" laughed Mr. Kouriyama as he took a big gulp of orange juice from his glass. "Say, do you guys know each other before?"

Mik and Wzy both turned and glanced at each other.

"No." they flatly said at the same time.

"Okay..." Itoko commented as Youko cheerfully smiled at the two in that awkward moment. Wzy laughed slightly afterwards but Mik shifted his eyes away, seemingly a bit embarassed.

"Well, at any rate I hope you are aware of your status as teachers, even if it's just *ahem* temporary. I expect you to draw the line between yourselves and the students when the new term starts. They're in High School, and thus need both our knowledge and guidance. Well, maybe except my class, 2-D, who only needs a minimum amount of those, since they're very good and all...Unlike a certain class 2-C. Oh pardon me, I forgot their adviser is here." spoke Katou hastily as he looked at Tani Hayato, who is peacefully sipping on his milk chocolate.

"Huh? Oh, it's okay." said Tani, scratching his hair. "My class is a bit, well...loud, so I hope you guys can understand."

"And a relative of Itoko-sensei's in there too." playfully commented Youko.

"Doesn't matter." interrupted Itoko

"Really!? Could it be Takano Akira?" blurted out Kouriyama

"Doesn't matter." repeated Itoko

"HA! Then I'm correct right?" exclaimed Kouriyama

"No." Itoko answered simply

"Hmm...If I were to guess I think it would be Harima-kun." said Tani

"...no."

"Haha, you're being silly again Tani-sensei." Interrupted Katou. "But of course I can guess why." he added

"Now, now enough of that talk. We're in vacation too you know. Summer should be enjoyed. School matters are left in school." said Kouriyama

Katou gave a slightly insulting laugh before sipping on his watermelon shake. Tani remained silent as if nothing happened. Wzy and Mik were unsure of what to do, so they both just sat there, observing the situation.

"So, who's in for karaoke after this?" offered Katou. "The night's still early after all."

"Sounds good! I'm in." answered Kouriyama enthusiastically. "Let's go Tani-sensei!" (But actually, he's hoping Itoko would come.)

"Hmm..okay." answered Tani

"I'll pass." said Itoko (awwww - Kouriyama)

"I'll be going with Itoko-sensei. Sorry." said Youko with a smile.

"How about you guys?" asked Kouriyama, turning to Wzy and Mik, who were both looking clueless at the moment.

"I...guess it won't hurt to go." replied Wzy

"Umm...sorry, but I have something to do after this. But I hope you guys enjoy." answered Mik in a polite tone.

A few more minutes of chatting passed before Itoko stood up and announced that she'll be leaving. Youko did the same, and, after bidding good night to everyone, they made their way out of the cafe. A few minutes later Mik also stood up, bid everyone goodnight, and left as well.

"Hmm...Still have lots of unpacking to do." Mik said to himself as he looked at the night sky while waiting for a cab at the sidewalk. The stars can be clearly seen despite the tall buildings and bright city lights.

"BEEP BEEP!"

He nearly jumped in surprise due to the loud sound of a vehicle's horn, and was even more surprised when he saw that it came from a shiny, red sportscar...and that it stopped in front of him. The biggest shock was when its tinted windows are lowered, revealing the driver to be none other than the arts teacher.

“Mik-sensei!” Youko called out from the window. “Are you going home already?”

“Umm…yeah. I’m waiting for a cab.” Mik answered, still looking at car.

“I see. Well, good night then.” Youko said, as the tinted window slowly rose from the car’s door.

“Yeah…good night.” Mik answered, slightly waving his hand. A moment ago he thought Youko will give him a ride to his house, but now it all seemed like a far-flung fantasy, as the car’s windows were completely shut, and it revved up its engine and drove away.





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well, my first time writing, hope it doesnt suck that bad. =S.
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Chapter 3 – First 1/2 day of school? A Dream
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*Distant sound of school bells ringing

It was a typical day in Yagami High, students were slowly streaming into school and getting into their classes.

Ishikawa and Asou of class 2-C were walking towards the class after the morning physical training.

"Man, this is tiring...oh well, we have to train hard for the Regionals next month." said Ishikawa as he was dragging his feet to class
"Yeah, it is kinda of tiring I guess." Asou replied, patting his vice-cap on the shoulder.
"Woohoo, feels good to be back in school man, miss all my friends already, especially our class, I think we have bonded a lot during the sports festival, who ever knew that harima can be a good guy also.Oh well, I am soooo looking forward to the cultural festival! Maybe I can make use of this chance to get close to Eri-chan!" Ishikawa exclaimed, getting all hyper thinking abt the girl he had a crush on.
"Indeed, lets still not forget our regionals" replied Asou
"Man, you are no fun..." pouted Ishikawa as they both continued towards the class.


"Konichi... ahhhh!" shouted Ishikawa as he was greeted by a flurry of flying objects as he opened the class door.

"oowwww!! Who threw these stuff! Come out right now!" demanded Ishikawa.

"ehh ishi, i suggest you do not pursue this matter.. *points at something" suggested Asou

"Nani! How can I not bother after someone threw a frigging bunch of stuff at me!! I mean, oh...ok..never mind..." said Ishikawa,*whistles a happy tune as he walks to his seat, after his eyes trailed to where Asou was pointing, to see Lala-chan beating up Imadori.

"Ah, school has started at last, heh, summer sure was boring for me, training almost everyday, oh well, seems like the teacher isn't here yet, time to nap!!" said Ishikawa, as he was smiling happily over the fact that he can take a nap.

After a while, the class of 2-C started streaming in one by one, and in no time, everyone in the class was present, including the all time school deliquent Harima Kenji.

As usual, Ishikawa's 'short nap' lasted all the way till lunch break.

"Oi, time for lunch you lazy bum" said Asou as he nudged Ishikawa awake.
Ishikawa rubs his eyes and looks at his watch. "What! I slept through classes again! Oh man, this is sooo not good, if this continues, I am gonna have crappy results!"
"Eh, you already have crappy results" said the person sitting beside Ishikawa.
"Man, talk about being direct, that hurt my feelings you know!" replied Ishikawa, going all weepy eyes.
"Well, Ace is saying the truth Ishikawa, you better buck up, I cant have my vice-captain being retained and all you know" said Asou rolling his eyes.

An aura of depression hovered over Ishikawa as he laid his head on the table, weeping away.

"Anyway, lets leave Ishikawa alone and go grab something to eat Ace" said Asou.
"Sure thing" replied Ace.
"Nooo!!! Do not leave me alone!!" moaned Ishikawa as he continued to be depressed.
"Adios, Ishi-san" said Asou and Ace
"Fine, hang on, lemme dig out my wallet...ok lets go." muttered Ishikawa.

So Ace, Asou and Ishikawa walked down the corridors towards the cafeteria. Well, Ace and Asou walked, and Ishikawa drifted, still with his aura of depression hanging over his head...

"Say Ace"
"Yeah?"
"You really should come for try-outs, you do have the height and all.."
"Nah, no thanks.."
"Really, you should!"
"No thanks"
"Come on, give it a try."
"Nah..too busy with other stuff"
"Well, ok...haha, one day i WILL get you to come"
"If you insist"

Said Ace and Asou as they were walking, with Ishikawa still wallowing in his depression and muttering to himself
"I must work harder, I must work harder", freaking out all the year 1s who walked by them.



*Ring Ring

"Mushi Mushi?"
"Yo Ishikawa, training is in 1 hour, don't forget"
"Ah ok.."

"So it was all just a dream...oh well..cant wait for school to begin..." said Ishikawa, as he got out of bed and started getting ready to go for training


--End--
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QUOTE(danchou @ Nov 17 2006, 11:06 AM) *

well, my first time writing, hope it doesnt suck that bad. =S.
guess i will start school. xD
SPOILER

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Chapter 3 – First 1/2 day of school
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*Distant sound of school bells ringing

It was a typical day in Yagami High, students were slowly streaming into school and getting into their classes.

Ishikawa and Asou of class 2-C were walking towards the class after the morning physical training.

"Man, this is tiring...oh well, we have to train hard for the Regionals next month." said Ishikawa as he was dragging his feet to class
"Yeah, it is kinda of tiring I guess." Asou replied, patting his vice-cap on the shoulder.
"Woohoo, feels good to be back in school man, miss all my friends already, especially our class, I think we have bonded a lot during the sports festival, who ever knew that harima can be a good guy also.Oh well, I am soooo looking forward to the cultural festival! Maybe I can make use of this chance to get close to Eri-chan!" Ishikawa exclaimed, getting all hyper thinking abt the girl he had a crush on.
"Indeed, lets still not forget our regionals" replied Asou
"Man, you are no fun..." pouted Ishikawa as they both continued towards the class.
"Konichi... ahhhh!" shouted Ishikawa as he was greeted by a flurry of flying objects as he opened the class door.

"oowwww!! Who threw these stuff! Come out right now!" demanded Ishikawa.

"ehh ishi, i suggest you do not pursue this matter.. *points at something" suggested Asou

"Nani! How can I not bother after someone threw a frigging bunch of stuff at me!! I mean, oh...ok..never mind..." said Ishikawa,*whistles a happy tune as he walks to his seat, after his eyes trailed to where Asou was pointing, to see Lala-chan beating up Imadori.

"Ah, school has started at last, heh, summer sure was boring for me, training almost everyday, oh well, seems like the teacher isn't here yet, time to nap!!" said Ishikawa, as he was smiling happily over the fact that he can take a nap.

After a while, the class of 2-C started streaming in one by one, and in no time, everyone in the class was present, including the all time school deliquent Harima Kenji.

As usual, Ishikawa's 'short nap' lasted all the way till lunch break.

"Oi, time for lunch you lazy bum" said Asou as he nudged Ishikawa awake.
Ishikawa rubs his eyes and looks at his watch. "What! I slept through classes again! Oh man, this is sooo not good, if this continues, I am gonna have crappy results!"
"Eh, you already have crappy results" said the person sitting beside Ishikawa.
"Man, talk about being direct, that hurt my feelings you know!" replied Ishikawa, going all weepy eyes.
"Well, Ace is saying the truth Ishikawa, you better buck up, I cant have my vice-captain being retained and all you know" said Asou rolling his eyes.

An aura of depression hovered over Ishikawa as he laid his head on the table, weeping away.

"Anyway, lets leave Ishikawa alone and go grab something to eat Ace" said Asou.
"Sure thing" replied Ace.
"Nooo!!! Do not leave me alone!!" moaned Ishikawa as he continued to be depressed.
"Adios, Ishi-san" said Asou and Ace
"Fine, hang on, lemme dig out my wallet...ok lets go." muttered Ishikawa.

So Ace, Asou and Ishikawa walked down the corridors towards the cafeteria. Well, Ace and Asou walked, and Ishikawa drifted, still with his aura of depression hanging over his head...

"Say Ace"
"Yeah?"
"You really should come for try-outs, you do have the height and all.."
"Nah, no thanks.."
"Really, you should!"
"No thanks"
"Come on, give it a try."
"Nah..too busy with other stuff"
"Well, ok...haha, one day i WILL get you to come"
"If you insist"

Said Ace and Asou as they were walking, with Ishikawa still wallowing in his depression and muttering to himself
"I must work harder, I must work harder", freaking out all the year 1s who walked by them.
--End--



Woops, I think I gave out the wrong idea. haha. I was supposed to write the story based from your characters. happy.gif
But wait, don't remove your story. laugh.gif I'll be needing it for reference (or adding it altogether) in the later chapters since I learned a lot about Ishikawa's personality from it. It has a nice touch of school life too. smile.gif

If anyone else wants to write a short slice of life story about their character (be it about their past, how they're related to another character (like chapter 1), or simply in a simple scenario (like chapter 2 and dashou's work) then it would be most welcome. It will add more depth/content to the story, and will allow me to learn more about your character aside from the details in their profiles. happy.gif

And of course, I'll never forget to credit you for it. laugh.gif

@kenjiharima
yes, a picture would be nice, but isn't a requirement.

@puppeteer
if you're ok with Takano Akira calling you 'Peter' (from PUPPETEER) in chapter 1, then that'll be your character name for the majority of the story. If you don't like it, kindly inform me of your alternative. thanks happy.gif. I just kinda thought that "puppeteer" would be better as a codename.




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oooppsss, x.x.
i read that u said that we each post a diff chapter. haha. sorry!!
it was fun though. ~.~
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QUOTE(royal66 @ Nov 16 2006, 07:25 PM) *

Story name: Avodroc Rian (last name, first name; people always mispronounce my last name, so here I'll also use a hard-to-pronounce one.)

Hehe I hear you. But if you spell it backwards, it becomes very easy to pronounce happy.gif

I am pleased to see so many members displaying their writing prowess. Who says WF forums isn't a learning experience? Keep it up.

I am also amused as the previous Wannabe Rumble thread was focused on fighting games and their character move executions. Diversity for the win!




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2) Deep within the illusions of a dark desire, the footprints left behind carry memories of a lost love. Can you see it?
3) Traveling in opposite directions, a masked storm is fast approaching. Can you feel it?
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ok i'll write some of my story for everwatcher refrence.

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*a morning day in a apartment room actually it was Ace's room and this day is a first day of school in 2-c

"Yawwwwnn... hmm what time is it now?" said Ace.
"Uh-oh it's already 6.30 am $#!T it's time to go to school!"

So Ace quickly get himself to take a bath and rush into school but in his way to school he met Megumi Sagano

Ace: Ow... i must hurry if not that gorilla sensei gonna kick my butt
Sagano: Oiii... Ace (shouting and waving her hand)
Ace: Huh... Sagano-san? (Ace walking toward sagano)
Sagano: What are you doing in this time we're going to late.
Ace: Awww... c'mon i wake up late, and now i have to run without rest to school.
Sagano: Me too...
(A limousine passing Ace and Sagano it was Eri limousine)
Eri: Hey both of you need a ride?
Ace: ACTUALLY I NEED IT PLEASE...
Eri: Ok not a problem
Ace&Sagano: Thank you (with smile and tears)

In limousine

Eri: Hey i actually curious about your relationship Ace can you tell me about someone you love?"
Ace: Hell no i don't have plan to get girlfreind right now (actually he's lie)
Sagano: Really... but you must be have someone in your mind
Ace: NO i don't have
Sagano: Well... what a cold type guy.
Eri: Anyway Ace i think if i'm not wrong why you always remain Sagano side?
Ace: ugh... (with blushin red face) actually we're freinds since childhood
Sagano: yes that's right we're just freind
Eri: Oww... you must be a basketball player like Sagano right?
Ace: No... in past i was a basketball player and sagano taught me a lot of basketball thing
Sagano: Yup that's right but now you didn't want to continue to play basketball right? it's a pity you know you have a enough height and skill to play.
Ace: No... i don't want to continue it cuz i'm lazy
Eri: Why don't you join the Basketball club?
Ace: You know i can't join cuz in that training day i have to do part time job, and i can't pass it
Sagano: Too bad...
Eri: Anyway we've arrive c'mon we have to see our class

Outside Limo
Ace: Thanks i think without your car i'm gonna be late as well as Sagano
Eri: You too see you...

In class announcement board
Ace: Let's see where class i'm in... huh 2-c hmm... not bad what about you Sagano?
Sagano: Yay...I'm in 2-c too we're same class as well as Tenma, Asou, Harima, Eri, Suo, Akira, etc
Ace: (In Ace's mind: what Akira-chan in 2-c oh god thanks to you this is my great day)
Ace: What about Saeko?
Sagano: She is in 2-c too, why do you ask?
Ace: Nothing just asking
Sagano: hmm... something fishy
Ace: Nothing really (he is lie)
Fuyuki: (from distance) Oiii... Ace let's get into our class
Ace: Well you go first Sagano i'll catch you later
Sagano: Ok see you
Ace: Well the day of school begin so let see... i want to smoke a cigar before i go to class.

Someone approaching Ace
Kouriyama: Hey you no smoking around school area!
Ace: Aw c'mon gorilla can't you see i'm having a great day now
Kouriyama: WHAT DID YOU SAY???
Ace: Ah... nothing just kidding (begin to flee)
Kouriyama: Hey come here!!!

Well that day it was a great day for Ace even he lie to everyone about his feeling.
-The End-


P.S: Anyway this is my first time to write fanfiction story, i think this story isn't good than anyone here but this is at least i can do for support everwatcher plan. happy.gif




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Count me in too..... Hope not too late.... happy.gif

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Story name: riddle is okay....

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-fav drink: Bloody Mary, Lemon Tea....
-fav quote: "It's so tiresome..."
-has played some sports such as basketball, soccer, tennis, swimming....
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ADD: Don't know if i can make a good reference story for you but i'll try to post mine later... happy.gif




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