Hi guys, as you know, I'm kinda half drunk
That's probably why I'm kinda get into this stuff... wine helps me with my art ability... I know that I'm not a good writer, so, please don't bother with this one.. (this is my first time though)
Anyhow, I'll just create a poem addressed to my late grandmother

My grandmother

fifteen years have you left us,
But deep inside,
You still lives,
Motivating me,
Your worthless grandson.

Your kindness,
I will never forget,
Neither I can repay it,
Only remains in my heart.

Though it seems futile,
You always stay,
Though I fail to keep my promise,
Never you get angry.

This spoiled grandson,
Never know hard work,
Little known is reason,
Thinking tomorrow it will work.

Fifteen years ago,
When I looked at the moon,
Its still has the same halo,
As I saw in winter moon.

This worthless grandson,
Wandering and wandering,
Without real destination,
Only with destiny who is guiding,
With no exact destination.

Though fifteen years has left,
But deep inside,
You still lives,
Motivating me,
Your worthless grandson.

In my opinion, It's very good poetry

your grand mother must be very proud to have a grandson so caring!!! even a poem.

i know. many grand mothers and grandfather care about their "grandchildrens" (is this have sense)

my theory is that they see us like the chlid they care so long ago. and they threat us like their childrens beacuse theirs are so grow up and don't have time to be in their house all day eating the food they prepare etc, or to play with then.

well that jus what i think.

apart from that very sentiental your poem.



by the way isn't this The Eri FC. where is eri?

Hoho, sorry for my dunk post before...
Anyhow, that's just for something to write..
Well, I'll create some more for Eri
Need to get some more booze perhaps

My lady of the night,
wafts down a ridge,
comes to embrace me,
oh so tenderly,
thine hair,
'tis silk like,
golden webbings,
oh so enticing,
thine skin,
so soft and fair,
makes me tingle,
in the cold frosty air,
your countenace,
begs not of pity,
rather to love you,
for what you are,
yes this seems odd,
but oh so very true,
oh ojou-sama,
i worship you.


p.s. dont tell yakumo about this.....

(EDIT: OH YEAH THANKS TO THE MODS FOR PUTTING IT HERE>>>> COULNDT FIND THE PAGE,..)

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Searched have I,
for your Gracious glance,
the power of which,
beyond that of much,
true it be,
you be a spirit,
merely residing,
in the depths,
of my soul,
alive come thee,
through vigorous,
and persistant,
coaxing,
the power of which,
suffices thine wanting,
nevertheless to me, o goddess,
you are but,
entire existence,
sublime and true,
when the earth,
divides in two.


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what seems real,
is not,
yet what isn't,
it is,
truly have i,
been blessed,
by being ,
beside you,
thine eyes,
gleam like diamonds,
glow with such promise,
words can't yet express,
thine passion,
i have loved thee,
since i met thee,
thine glance,
encapsulates me,
giving me,
all the love,
that i could e'er,
deserve

I am fan of Eri sama
Loyal is my body and respect is my blood.
I have met over a thousand Eri fans.
Unknown to Eri Sama
Nor known to Other Eri fans.
Have withstood pain to protect her crest
Waiting for one's arrival.
I have no regrets, this is the only path.
So as I pray "Unlimited Eri Fan�

S ometimes i just can't stop thinking about you...
A s long as my life allows me til the very end...
W ill protect you even if it cause my life...
A nd all i want from you is that you be happy...
C ared for you I've always been...
H eaven as my witness that you're my all...
I wish you could stay beside me...
K nowing you is what i called fate...
A lways wondered if you understand that...

E verything is what you are to me...
R ealise that you're my princess and my queen...
I n my heart you will always be and will never fade away...

^^ posted this before but nvm...
give some comment

Three thumbs up! If I only had three...

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The Day my Heart Pounded

-Sawachika Eri-

1. It was the sports festival when this happened.
I felt like all the spoons at my house bent.
The fight was taken over by our class and 2-D.
Sensei even said “overthrow 2-D.”

2. It all happened on the horseback game.
Just me, Hige, and two others, sunshine and no rain
I felt guilty about shaving his cool hair.
Stupid me, if I hadn’t dared…

3. His hat was falling off; he’s going to be laughed at.
I needed to act super quick and extra fast.
I grabbed his hat and placed it back on his head.
I rolled down on the ground, acting like I was shot dead.

4. What a silly move, I have a grudge on the man I saved.
Why did I have to rave?
Maybe I returned the favor for shaving his glory.
That is another story.

5. That night, we danced on the blue.
Poor Tenma doesn’t have a clue.
Everyone looked at us; we were completely stuck.
I said to him “your dancing; sucks”.

6. This is the day I would likely remember.
It was the day when my heart pounded.
Unlike anything else, I felt love for the first time.
Calm down, everything will be fine.

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Feedback please.

diapason...you are one avid 17 yr old...... how much time do you exactly have on your hands.... nah no criticism from me.

nice rhyming, from eri's POV,
but.. zah nvm, nice job man!!!

Diap's poems are really good...

The vocabulary used is vast... (At least to me)

I think it still could be made better... Like making the sentence length more consistent... and making use of beautiful words...

I'll be checking out on your improvements...

Visit FanFiction.net and look for jonz-3-5, my username. I use free style poetry. They say it's good. And I still have lots more where that came from.

Hey, I'm kinda new here and I really don't know what to post...but I do like writing poems and so just wanna post a poem I wrote. Hope everyone enjoys it. Long live Eri-sama

Finding a goddess like you,
It's really a dream come true,
Having a stare from your eyes,
Makes even my worst days seemed nice.

I swear by the stars in the sky,
That I shall love you till I die,
For you are my paradise,
You're the one who light up my life.

You were always there when my heart was broken,
You talked to me and made my spirit burn,
With hopes I trust in you,
That your love for me will eventually come true.

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Here's another poem for all to enjoy...as usual dedicated ro Eri-sama...well this is her fan club after all...haha she got herself another maniac worshipper (me).

I saw a girl walking down the streets,
Rain dripping through her sheets,
One may wonder why,
A girl as beautiful as her could cry.

I saw her again at the school,
However this time she looked so cool,
Smiling sweetly as she talked,
Looking up gracefully as she walked.

Funny how this girl intrigued me,
For as lovely as she could be,
Deep down inside I could see,
The little princess was lonely.


Err....this turned out to be a little darker than I expected...I am writing as if I am one of the schoolmates haha....looking from far away...beginning from the rainning scene...should I continue this or leave it as it is? Err...I think I will decide that on next post...

lol, before you post something, let me post first. I have a good one!

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Dad

-Sawachika Eri-

1. I may be rich but my heart is priceless.
If he’s gone, I’m unworthy to be called a princess.
Without him and mom, I wouldn’t be even here.
I would be enveloped forever in fear.

2. I love my dad as much as others love theirs.
He gives me his tender loving care.
But oftentimes, we stay quiet at home.
Making it one empty big dome

3. If I was given a chance, I would like to see my dad for one full day.
He gave me his care. I had something to repay.
On our table, we would eat nikujaga together; made by my own hands.
It’s not exactly a princess chore but it fits regular people’s trends.

4. I love my dad as much as others love theirs.
I won’t ever let go or exchange his care.
Now that he’s somewhere in the world, I stand alone.
Remembering him while eating an ice cream cone.

Kinda short but I'll fill ya all on more of Eri's magnifiques.

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@townberry, you're a natural poet; the words and the expressions are great!

On second thought, I won't continue my previous poem...I prefer for it to stay that way cause if it goes on I think it will involve Harima...not that I dislike him with Eri-sama but I wanted to keep my poem in a more expressive way, more deep feelings rather than telling stories..I think if I go on with that it will be a Harima x Eri-sama thing hahaha. So here's a new one for Eri-sama


Ever wonder why?
Sunflower always looks up to the sky,
Ever wonder why?
When the princess is sad you too could cry.

Ever wonder who?
The princess may pick to woo,
Ever wonder who?
The person might just be you

Ever wonder when?
You kept on thinking only about the princess there and then,
Ever wonder when?
You tried so hard to catch a glimpse of her magnificient sight every single moment you could like a fanatic fan.

Many things passed in our lives as we grow,
However there's always a truth out there to be told,
There's only one person who we could never forget even we tried so hard,
And that's the Princess Eri, the goddess and the only true love in our hearts.


P.S: Maybe a little too corny hahaha.....anyway, hope everyone enjoys it.

Hehe, we just might catch up with the YFC poetry club! Keep it rhyming, boiz

Sorry I can't write poetry here, Russian poetry rules are too strict on exact rhymes and number of syllables in every rhyming sentence...

I'll try some freestyle tomorrow, after I've had some food, but I don't think I really understand american/asian rhyming style...

I've been confessed too
more times than I know
every guy around
has their love to show.

Flowers, chocolates
presents and puppies.
These don't impress,
coming from such yuppies.

I tend to scoff
it's a monthly a habit
that was until I was confessed to
in a style most rapid.

On one bended knee
in attire all messy
right on the side walk
he did confess to me.

I love you, he said
with my hand in his
he looked up to me
behind those sunglasses.

Now wait just a minute
he's not quite my type!
And this blatant confession?
It doesn't feel right!

Still I was shocked.
Taken aback if you will.
For out here in public
did his heart just spill.

Could I really refuse him?
As my heat did flutter?
If I began to talk,
might I just stutter?

Calm down girl.
You can hanlde this easy.
Even if being with this guy
might you feel queasy.

So with a sigh,
and my compsure collected,
I was ready to answer
in a manner respected.

"I don't know about this,"
I said, standing in place.
When suddenly another beauty
gave him an embrace.

"Hario, dear!
You look like you're thinner.
Hurry on home,
I've made a big dinner!"

And with that,
and a smile and wave,
this beauty walked off,
leaving her guy to his grave.

As my fury was boiling,
with agression over grace,
I swiftly let him meet,
my knee to his face.

Quickly he fell,
with a hard thud to the ground.
Quickly I left,
I mean, why stick around?

And so it began,
on a bright sunny day.
The tale of Harima and Eri,
And their love of dismay.

~<3

Just finished watching School Rumble Second Season (I'm slow I know) and I am a little disappointed on how Eri-sama's appearances are literally diminishing in the last few episodes....sigh....So here's something for the great princess...you're still in my heart


Life is bitter when there's something you could not tell,
And just ask you think you're rising you fell,
Hitting the cold unforgiven concrete hard and painfully,
No one's there to listen so the princess sobbed silently.

The loneliness in her heart could not be told,
For a princess melanchonic tell could not be sold,
People simply would not believe a word,
Of how painful she felt and everything around her did not worked.

Sadly and cruelly the little princess had to endure all,
Keeping a false mask around her which she could not afford to let fall,
Life ain't that pitiful for her from the moment she was born,
Yet as time passed by she felt more and more forlorn.

How I hope one day this princess will be happy,
How I hope she would smile softly again; oh so lovely,
Yet know I could not do anything for her really,
But to pray hard and continue on protecting my sweet Princess Eri.


P.S: I'm really disappointed of how they kinda ignore Eri-sama in season 2...hope that won't happen again in the 3 semester....hmm...come to think of it my University too, somehow has 3 semester....ahhh live a school life alike Eri-sama (even just a tiny bit)...I died happy.

Alright, let me give it a try...

What we believe
Is an image we receive
From the cold yellow light
In the middle of the night
We're all stuck to the screen
We don't know what we have seen
But the only thing we know
Is that it'll never let go

Yes, we're enslaved
It is our deceitful faith
It is what we crave
It just might be our grave
But we can't blame Her
She's both our sky and earth
We are all proud to say
We have seen the Golden Way

Hehehe I'm seriously like spamming this thread with my sucky poems haha....I hope no one minds.....all for the love of Eri-sama!

Sometimes I wonder,
What exactly is the thing that the princess ponders,
She has wealth, fame and even a butler,
Yet she wants journey alone in search for her own happy ever after.

Sometimes I wonder,
Is it that hard to voice out what you feel deep under,
For the princess refused to speak her truthfully even in her slumber,
And as days of keeping mum passed by, she grew sadder and sadder.

This beloved girl is certainly the most hard headed girl I'd ever seen,
She's nice and caring yet she prefers to act cold and mean,
She wanted to be with the guy she loves, I know she is keen,
Yet when questioned, she insisted she is clean.

Frustration takes one over easily as we all looked at this beloved princess silently,
When will she be truth to herself and live a life she wanted happily?
When will we get to see the conclusion we wanted to see so badly?
Everyone is anticipating an answer from you, my lovely Princess Eri.


P.S: Just to voice out my frustration of how Eri-sama kept denying her feelings in front of everyone...

I must say it hasn't struck me before, but it seems that everyone but me is rhyming about Her feelings, while I just can't stop thinking of Her power over people... I mean her charm, it's hypnotising! Even a girl has fallen for Her for crying out loud! So that must explain why I always write about Eri-sama's fans to show how devoted She can get them... Maybe I should be more like you guys and start writing poetry about Her feelings and emotions.

P.S.: Writing a poem about Her arranged wedding right now... This contradicts every rule of Russian poetry I've every learnt... It's getting me scared...

EDIT: Forgot to mention, very nice poems, guys (and girl)!

Don't worry pal...as long as your poem comes from your heart...it's all good and beautiful . Not that I follow any rules I learned...what did I learn any rules at all? Haha I took science and not literature....but I do know the basics....one has to learn English after all....oh well...So don't worry bout the rules...just do what you like...

Here's another one for Eri-sama...a little different this time...it's about how inspirational she could be

I never thought things will ended up this way,
This princess here is so special she is in my mind every single day,
Never before I had looked up at anyone like how I looked up to her,
Yet if you think I'm madly in love with the beautiful princess, I beg to differ.

True she is captivating,
True she is fascinating,
True I think of her alot,
Yet between the princess and I, it's not the way that you thought.

She showed me the conflict of life,
She thought me one should always strife,
She showed me there is always another story behind,
She reminded me life is not always that kind.

Bringing strength and believe to me she did,
And never would I forget her great deed,
I hope to hear from this beloved princess again,
And I too hope she will find her own happiness by then.



P.S: Weird...just weird..but I don't care anymore....I'm gonna go resume my Digital Logic studies....my brain is cracking....

Poetry is the hardest thing in the world...
But I'll try...

Super Star
Twinkling stars begins to dance
Those in heaven falls into trance
Eri-chama my perfect goddess
Suns & stars, no, U're da hottest

Subliming Beauty
Stepping on Flowers n' Killing those birds
What's not perfect are destroyed without words
Eri-tama show forth your beauty
And Man will stop doing his cruelty

Infinities
Only two things that are infinity
the universe and human stupidity
Albert Einstein, you're a pity
Wait till u see Eri's beauty

nice poetry!

what do they call these again?

HAIKU?

Not really/.... 1st basic of haiku is 17 syllables

What I see,
in eri's eyes,
makes my heart race,
with unchecked pace,
I faint.

Hm...I noob at Haiku haha in fact as I said before I noob at every single poetry rules available...oh well...


Love is blind,
Love is unkind,
Yet the princess is oblivious to the fact,
The guy does not love her back.

The moment of truth is arriving,
It's going to happen; that dreadful scene,
As the princess's misunderstood grew stronger and stronger,
I could only pray nothing bad will happen to her.

Will her feelings be revealed volutarily?
Will she get what she wanted finally?
Will her happiness only be temporary?
Will there ever be an ending to her story?

A brave yet indecisive princess,
Please I beg of you do not indulge yourself anymore in this mess,
Loving without getting loved back from the other,
Little princess, in this story, sadly, will not be a happy ever after.

What!?
Eri got rejected by Harima!~?

I havent read the latest manga chapters... Damn I wanna know what happen...
I'll download them...

Mana ada...I'm saying that Eri-sama STILL doesn't know who Harima likes and if you read the lastest chapter....194 i think, super suspence....haha I leave it to you to find out...but imagine that a sentence from Eri-sama made someone dropped one's jaw...haha....when I read it I too dropped my jaw...for the last few recent chapter it's Harima and Eri-sama so for HarimaxEri-sama lovers...ahhh it's happy time haha

Eri Sawachika, I wanna marry yah.

A single line poem!

Don't be foolish
Being so selfish
Marry Eri?
You'll see tragedy...

Hahaha ROFL....a brilliant piece of art....I agree..one cannot marry Eri-sama...she's too precious and high above us...haha whoever wanna marry her must go through me the butler hahaha

Haha. You cant beat a one liner unless you use a one liner back xD

Well yeah but hey I am not the one trying to propose to Eri-sama haha....here's a one liner anyway:

Want to marry Eri?
try going though me,
I'm just a butler,
Hunting you all over

Haha lame....(dodges punches and kicks) It's totally out of my style....will post my real works soon haha.

LMFAO "I'm just a butler, Hunting you all over"

classic xD

Now that doesn't make any sense...ROFL!

Thats why its so classic Lololol

HAHAHA!
Does Nakamura have a crush on Eri or something?

I think you misunderstand xD

LOL I thought of Nakamura because of the word "butler"

Saddest Day on the Planet...
Sawachika Eri...
Fighting for victory...
Shana is so rough...
Winning sure is tough...

The end of the round...
Shana pushed her down...
When the votes were finalized...
That's when we all realize...
That Eri-sama had lost...
Making us all pause...

*bows head in sorrow, realizing that the poem is a hard-striking reality* *sniff*

I cried my heart out,
I heard a news I could so live without,
When it reached my ears it gave me a fright,
Our beloved little princess had lost the fight.

Never before I felt this way,
My face retorted; I was in dismay,
I felt my whole body went numb,
I tried to open my mouth but I went dumb.

To say I was sad was an understatement,
I was so crushed I didn't think I could feel any more contentment,
Yet true to the words that when you hit rock bottom and fell,
An angel will come and save you from hell.

I came to realisation that I should not lament over the loss,
Instead I should stand right up and fight back for a cause,
Little princess Eri wouldn't want us to feel sad,
She would want all of us to stand tall and fight back.

So if you love the princess as much as I do,
Stand back up, don't be a fool,
Fight on, for a loss shall not stop us from spreading the power of Ojou Eri,
The little princess so perfect, she's godly.

Sigh....I really feel Eri-sama wouldn't want us to be sad So....please try to stand back up...like how I'm trying too....

Yea you're right.... I will need some time to stand through the cruelty of the world....

Same here...

I must destroy things first before I can calm down...LMAO!

Here's another piece of crappy poem from the self proclaimed butler to the beloved Ojousama.

Gee I don't know what I am writing anymore...maybe I should stop now...it's going to be a story if I don't....and as to why i put the spoiler tag...is because I referred a little on the chapter 198 of manga..well just a little..so you have been warned....
Edit: See I changed it to above now...happy? It's always been my habit to crap after writing my poem...so haha sorry to warn after writing...but hey at least I put up the spoiler tag...so should have expected something that contains spoiler before reading right?

SPOILER

She stuttered when she talked,
She blushed as she walked,
Little princess is not her usual self,
And when the man talked she felt like hiding in a shelf.

Often she found herself dreaming away,
Yet confessing to him is not something she is going to say,
Her pride and ego overcame her again and again,
And when the man leave, her heart felt a pang of pain.

We all knew how the princess loves him so,
Yet again and again he acted towards the princess so cold,
How blind can this man be?
For Eri's love to him he could not see.

After much consideration the princess became braver,
She decided that every single moment with that man she is going to savor,
She took steps that was so daring I never see it coming,
She asked the man to stay and hope to bring their conflict to an ending.

Yet the night came and the night went,
The man left and little princess' heart was bent,
Yet he left a message so unexpected,
That when it was read, our little princess, fainted.

You should give the warning before the spoiler tag then....

Yeah same here...

I read the poem before reading the warning...

I'll delete them from my memories now... *hickz* Kay, should be done...

ROFL!

It's you're fault for clicking the spoiler tag...

Everything that is enclosed in spoiler tags are 100% spoilers...

LMAO!

If someone puts spoiler tags up it obviously means its going to be a spoiler.

Warning tags should not be needed.

SPOILER

Big deal, that message didn't change anything.

Haha thanks for clearing me up but since oh well they wanted it above I did re-edit it....

Anyway here's a short piece:



I met you during the darkest hour of my life,

Since then you have thought me how to strife,
As ignorant and stupid I could be,
You thought me new things and knowledge you gave to me,
From the dark life I used to live in,
You coloured them with music and laughter ever since,
I dunno until when we will be with each other,
So I'm going to thank you for all the things you gave me and remember you as the light of my life forever.

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[size="2"]Just a short piece to thank Eri-sama for everything she brought to my life Btw, if anyone happen to go into fictionpress.com and coincidentally see a poem 99% like this one...don't worry I didn't copy that....I wrote that too...haha....I posts poems in fictionpress so....just to clear things up....in case in a weird coincidental away someone happened to read my crappy poems there...